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Really good. I love the format and the way it reads. One thing I found a little odd was how some lines have the first letter capitalized and some don't. ...

This would work better with a different format. As Kepe said above, it doesn't really sound poetic. But it is well done and beautiful. Wherever you have a period, try ...

This is simply spectacular. I love how you reference so many different things... Rome... Indian mythology... quotes from the Bible.... did you even mention King Arthur once?... Greek myth.... The ...

I actually like the broken rhythm of this poem. The only things I would change are: 1. As Via said, take away the periods after yet and but. 2. Un-capitalize ...

This is a good beginning, I like the idea and it kept my attention. But it felt like everything happened too fast. You just told us everything that happened, without ...

I really liked this. The only thing I can find is that the rhythm is a little awkward in some parts, I'm not really sure why, sorry I can't be ...

Wow, I really like this! I think your rhyming works really well, I especially love the last two stanzas. It has a great feeling and message to it. The only ...

At first I wasn't sure I liked it, but when I read the last line, it made the whole thing. The only line I think you really need to change ...

Bravo! I absolutely love the rhythm! It changes in parts, so it doesn't get boring but it still flows nicely. I also like the way you tied the beginning in ...

I liked this! Your rhyming was good and it didn't sound forced, which is hard to do. My favorite lines were: Words are forgotten, and dreams are shed. But sugar ...

Hi again Ana. I really like this. Pablo was a good dog. I miss him too. I'm sure he would be very happy if he heard this poem! :) The ...

Hi Ana! Its me. I really liked this! I didn't find any grammar errors or punctuation errors or anything. And the story was really good to. It sounds like its ...

I really like this. Its short and simple, but has a good format and flows nicely. I like it because it seems like it has a lot of different meanings ...

Oh, please continue this! I was hooked right until the end! Your descriptions are so clear and simple, I could picture every detail so well. You have a great beginning. ...

I really like this! Its sweet, entertaining and fun. I only found one mistake: Next, she is massaging my droopy ears and scratches under my collar. There is a tense ...